Looking through your gallery, it is obvious to see that you are very skilled with pencils. This image caught my eye especially. It seems so lively as if you are actually witnessing it yourself. I noticed a few things, though: There seems to be a lack of different textures. Some of the textures seem to be the same, when they shouldn't be. For example: the hills and the sky.

The other thing I noticed deals with the focus of the picture. To me, it seems like the figure and the fortress in the background are competing to be the focus, since they're so close to each other *

In the end, they're just little thing that would give it more *oomph*. Either way, it's still a fantastic peice

_{*My monitor can sometimes screw things up, so I may not be seeing it as it is. If that is the case, I apologize.}